Whiplash by Sharlenne Rivera-Vélez

Posted: December 1, 2015 by Shade's Progress in Femme Fatale, Sharlenne Rivera-Vélez
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Whip by louten on DeviantArt.com

Her whip snapped against his back. “Did you really think I would’ve let you leave with my most prized possession?”

The old man fell on all fours. “Not willingly. The poison—,” he said as he reached for the necklace.

Her whip lashed out, grabbing it before the old man could take it.

She walked closer, “You mean this.“ She held a half-filled vial.

“How?” he said.

“A girl has her ways,” she smiled.

The old man followed her gaze, where a young man bled on the floor.

“Now,” she said as she raised her whip, “Say bye-bye.”

  1. mhparkin says:

    Awesome! XD
    Can I just say though that it’s flash fiction hun, not short story.
    It’s left me with a lot of questions though like, who is this woman with the wipe? what is actually going on in this scene? What are the surroundings like? Are you planning on expanding this story? For some reason I see this fiction a lot in the form of a comic.
    Awesome drawing BTW.


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